1. Upon analysis, I have revealed that I have a natural gift for sentence variation. However, I used simple sentences, as defined in the Rules for Writers on page 154, sparingly. My paragraphs about the various sides to the issue is a touch repetitive upon comparison.
2. My sentence transitions have mostly been replaced by the various subtitles that I used to label each paragraph. As previously stated, I feel that my paragraph introduction structure is a bit too uniform.
3. My vocabulary could use a little more flavor. My greatest strength is that my simple vocabulary is loyal to the QRG format. My greatest weakness is its redundancy that can be avoided by describing the stakeholders in more depth.
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